Subject: C430 JGSI Review Resent-Date: Mon, 11 Oct 1999 08:25:07 -0400 Resent-From: Geoffrey Fox Resent-To: p_gcf@npac.syr.edu Date: Thu, 7 Oct 1999 11:50:29 -0500 From: Joel Jones To: Geoffrey Fox >a)Overall Recommendation Excellent paper, I highly recommend it for publication. >b)Words suitable for authors There is little to say about your paper. It is to the point, describing the problem it solves, other approaches, etc. The top of page 5 is particularly good. The second paragraph on page 11 could be worded a little more clearly, where it enumerates the two approaches to event handling. I would either eliminate figures 2-4, or replace them with line drawings. A page and a half is a lot of space to use to present so little information. Similar comments hold for figures 5 and 6. It might be beneficial to show the dialog of figure 5 as just a text figure, rather than showing all the buttons and window decorations. >c)Words for me if necessary Joel Jones jjones@uiuc.edu