Subject: RE: Possible NSF ITR Proposal Resent-Date: Fri, 31 Dec 1999 15:28:18 -0500 Resent-From: Geoffrey Fox Resent-To: p_gcf@npac.syr.edu Date: Fri, 31 Dec 1999 15:21:28 -0500 From: "Peter Dragovitsch" To: "'Geoffrey Fox'" CC: "'Chris Lacher'" , "'Peter Dragovitsch (ODDL)'" Geoffrey, this is the version of your pre-proposal after Chris and I sat over it together. All changes are highlighted for easier detection. We didn't edit the introduction, however we recommend you to restructure the order of paragraphs in it as indicated below. We think it is better when the proposed research is stated in the very first sentences, then listed in detail, and finally the benefits for the NSF are stated. Please let us know if you need more input/help. Wishing you a happy new year, Peter Dragovitsch and Chris Lacher Peter Dragovitsch The Florida State University Office for Distributed and Distance Learning Suite C3524 University Center Tallahassee, FL 32306-2540 Phone: (850) 645-0392 Fax: (850) 644-5803 e-mail: pdragovitsch@oddl.fsu.edu -----Original Message----- From: Geoffrey Fox [mailto:gcf@npac.syr.edu] Sent: Tuesday, November 30, 1999 3:56 PM To: Joe Thompson; Nancy McCracken; Peter Dragovitsch; Chris Lacher Subject: Possible NSF ITR Proposal Please comment and review Thank You --------------------------------------------------------------------- Name: distedpreprosal2.doc distedpreprosal2.doc Type: Winword File (application/msword) Encoding: base64