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End of section 4.3:
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``The GBA represents the partitioning graph [\ldots] and the processors
interconnection graph into a simpler space''.
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Not grammatical.

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Section 5, para 2:
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``[\ldots] approximated by a linear system with {\em 11,676 number of
equations}''
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(my italics).  Not grammatical.

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Section 5, para 3, sentence 3: ``Also'' misspelt.

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Section 5.1, para 4, sentence 2: ``and'' misspelt.

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Section 5.1, para 5, sentence 5:
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``[\ldots] the total sum [\ldots]''. 
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Redundant use of ``total''.
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